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Finish the story…

October5

Student blogging challenge- Activity 5. Write a story beginning …….like a choose your own adventure
As other students visit your blog, they can add to the story in the comments.

I lay there in silence. All of a sudden the flashlight moves. I feel a shiver go down my shaking spine. The flashlight comes closer to the tent. I try to make out the figure of the person. I look down to see if Millie is still in the tent, but I just see traces of blood from her pillow to the door of the tent. I go to scream but I cover up my mouth with my hand. I hear scream and all of a sudden I see…

Now try to brief me in a comment what happens next!’

http://studentchallenge.edublogs.org/2011/10/02/challenge-4-after-hours/

by Lily posted under student bloggign challenge | 4 Comments »

4 Comments to

“Finish the story…”

October 8th, 2011 at 1:31 am alexandra110gs Says:
Thanks for the comment on my blog again Lily !
I am adding you to my blogroll!

http://alexandra110gs.edublogs.org/
~Alexandra~
October 9th, 2011 at 8:41 am Lily Says:
Alexandra,
Thanks. I will add you to mine as well!
Lily 🙂
October 20th, 2011 at 10:11 pm 2017mpb Says:
Hey Lily. What a nice story so far. I dont want to finish it, I would like you to, because you use very good details and descriptive words. I think your a very good writer. Keep writing, please. Check out my blogs sometime; http://www.2017mpb.edublogs.org.
-Mariah.
October 20th, 2011 at 10:11 pm 2017mpb Says:
Hey Lily. What a nice story so far. I dont want to finish it, I would like you to, because you use very good details and descriptive words. I think your a very good writer. Keep writing, please. Check out my blogs sometime; http://www.2017mpb.edublogs.org.
-Mariah.